~ Sueños y Susurros ~ victor padilla

Sunday, August 01, 2004

what's the use of falling in love...

Seeminly forever I’ve believed
Not only in love and kisses
But also in friendship and trust
Now am shatter,
Now I know
Neither of these are for me to feel
Just be quiet and stay low
Avoid some bullets called love
There’s no point to all of these
If love is not true and sencire
Now am shatter,
Now I know,
She is gone.

posted by Artax @ 8:19 PM  

2 Comments:

  • At 8:58 PM, Blogger Unknown said…

    Love never has been easy Victor.
    And because you share your poem with us,
    I am going to analyze it and give you my advice.

    Seeminly forever I’ve believed
    Not only in love and kisses
    But also in friendship and trust.

    They are good feelings. Keep them.

    Now am shatter,
    Now I know
    Neither of these are for me to feel
    Just be quiet and stay low

    When we are sad, we said things like these.
    You can’t be quit and stay low all your life.
    If you need it for a time nobody will blame you for that.
    But Victor you aren’t like that.


    Avoid some bullets called love
    There’s no point to all of these

    You can avoid the bullets called love.
    It’s like when you hit you hand with a hammer (trying to hit a nail), it hurts.
    But you must try again.
    One doesn’t choose to fall in love.
    Love hits you and you do something with this love.
    Sometimes it has a happy ending, sometimes doesn’t.

    If love is not true and sincere
    Now am shatter,
    Now I know,
    She is gone.

    Love is supposed to be true.
    Love sometimes isn’t sincere from the beginning.
    Because when you are in love, you try to show the best part of yourself only.
    But if you see the worst of someone and you still can love this person, you know that this love is true.
    But it’s better if it’s sincere from the beginning.
    And now you know a little more about Ireri.
    She is gone.
    Maybe she will not return to you.
    I think that you should forgive yourself
    And with the time forgive her.
    It isn’t right to be sad all the time.
    Think that it could be a good thing.
    You know that things happen for a reason.
    Well, I expect that this help you in some way.

    Bye.

    Lord Grou.

    P.D. My english isn't the best. But I think that you can understand what I wrote.

     

  • At 1:45 PM, Blogger Artax said…

    Thank you man... ^_^

     

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